Wednesday, April 20, 2022

Write-On Prompt: Earl's Two Requests


Note: Last night was prompt night at the Write-On Writing Group. I used the prompt that my first line had to be "When he died, their father had two requests." This is not a completed work, and I do have hope of expanding it. Where do you think I should go with it? 

Earl's Two Requests

When he died, their father had two requests. Making two the grand total of requests that Earl Little had made to his children in the entirety of existence. He’d been a solitary man, so quiet that it chased his first wife out the door of their farmstead after eight years where she did a lot of yelling and he did a lot of retreating. The divorce was handled civilly enough, Earl gave her everything she asked for as long as her requests came via the mail. He didn’t want to hear her voice anymore. It’s little wonder that his second wife was deaf. She couldn’t hear him, which was good because he didn’t have anything to say.

Earl fathered one child with each woman. Della was the product of his first marriage, her features were angular much like her father, but her personality rotund just like her mother. She was often belligerent toward authority while going through school and kept her peers at an arm’s length. Della struggled to trust anyone after her mother died of an embolism when Della was eighteen. At forty-one, Della lived alone, owning a cat that spent most of its time hiding under furniture. Her home was above a storefront downtown that she rented for three-fifty a month, and she made her money as a clerk at the thrift store at the edge of Jordan.

Earl’s second child was named Marvin, after Earl’s second-wife’s father. Marvin was raised in a house so quiet that he still felt driven to apologize for any sound he made, which made his normal stride almost absurd, as with each step he appeared to turn his jaw over his shoulder to whisper a quiet missive for the tap of his toes on the earth below. His shyness was so ingrained that many thought he was dumb, including most of his teachers in grade school. They were the most surprised when his ACTs came back perfect. Although it didn’t matter, Marvin didn’t have the courage to apply to schools, choosing to stock shelves overnight at the Save Mart, a time when the store was otherwise empty. Unlike Della, Marvin wasn’t alone in life, he still had his mother, who had also divorced Earl after a time. She might not have been able to hear, but she had never felt more alone than her twelve years out on that farm with that silent man.

Earl’s funeral was an unobtrusive affair, a graveside service consisting of the usual rites said before a crowd of Della and Marvin and the man that sold Earl Little his crop insurance. When the final words were spoken, Della whipped a pile of dirt into the hole, mad about something and just waiting for the appropriate time to yell it at someone. Marvin tried to ease the dirt from his palm, hoping it would drift down and not disturb the worms and other crawly things below much less his father’s corpse inside the casket.  After the funeral, Della and Marvin assumed they would never see each other again.

Except both were approached by the man who sold Earl crop insurance. His name Jamison Matterhorn, a red-haired man in his seventies. Earl had been his last living active client, and this funeral meant Jamison could officially retire with a clean slate and a clear conscience.

“You two,” he waved, as Della and Marvin were already heading toward different cars parked a few feet away from the gravesite. “I have something for you.”

“What now?” Della cried. “We paid all the bills already. Bleeding vultures, pecking at dead folks’ bones for every last cent. I tell you, Marvin, we’ll both end up in the poor house just cause our pops died.”

Marvin didn’t respond. Della terrified him so much that he actually worried that the volume of her voice might crack open the fabric of the atmosphere and send them all spiraling into the vacuum of space. The only reassurance he got from that was that he knew that sound didn’t travel in outer space, so at least it would be quiet.

“No, no, nothing like that,” Jamison said. He introduced himself and how he was connected to their father. Explaining that Earl had bought crop insurance faithfully for that the last fifty years. He also had served as a lawyer of sorts for Earl in the last few months, as the sick man (Earl had had cancer although no one knew, and he never bothered to tell anyone) put his affairs into order. The one hundred twenty-two acres were to be sold to pay off the debt incurred from trying to keep such a small farm going. The house wasn’t much, and likely would be destroyed by whoever bought the land. All Earl left was two requests.

“See he wants two things from you both,” Jamison said, taking out an envelope and opening it. He hadn’t read it yet, but had been instructed to read it aloud to both of them, just to be sure that the note was heard at least once.

“Jesus,” Della raised her arms to the sky. She didn’t like what was going to be said even though she hadn’t a clue what it was.

Marvin put his hands in his pockets, nervous for the sake of being nervous.

“Ok,” Jamison cleared his throat. “First, Earl says he’d like you to try and forgive him for being such a lousy father. You don’t have to go all the way through with it, just a try it out, and see if you can forgive a little at least.”

“Cripes,” Della muttered. Marvin was already feeling sorry for having been put into a place of having to forgive his father.

“Second, ‘I want you both to try to love someone. Even if it doesn’t work out. Give it a go. It’s something worth trying at least once.’” Jamison handed the note Della, his job done and walked off.


Thursday, April 7, 2022

Blog Update: I'm Still Writing!




Well, this old blog has become a bit of a barren wasteland over the first few months of 2022, and while a lack of motivation shoulders most of the blame, it hasn’t been entirely because I haven’t been writing. Between a busier work cycle and a series of other projects, I just haven’t been able to devote time to writing content for the blog. So, I thought I’d report on a few things going on concerning my writing career. 

  • Earlier this year, I found out another one of my short stories will be published by a literary journal. My story entitled “String Theory” will be published in the spring edition of American University’s literary magazine FOLIO. I will let you know when that it is available for purchase. 
  • I have the next episode of the Pandemonium series wrote, but haven’t been happy with it. So, I am waiting for a bit of time and inspiration to tackle an edit. As I said at the beginning, this is based off a NANOWRIMO project from a couple years ago, and I encountered similar issues that time. I was hoping a different approach would open some avenues, but so far, traffic remains stalled. 
  • This week I received news that I placed second in the first round of the NYC Midnight Short Story contest. My story “What’s in a Name?” was created based off the prompts of Political Satire (Genre), Edutainment (Subject), and a Witch (Character). I hesitated making this story available to read publicly initially because I am generally uncomfortable in the political sector. I believe that political beliefs are like rear ends, everyone has one and all of them stink. This sort of attitude means that I almost always revert to a sophomoric sarcasm when confronted with political satire. The judges picked up on two of my inspirations in my style: Vonnegut and Orwell. I wasn’t sure I pulled it off, but they seemed to like it. Now, I have to consider if I want to take the edits they offered and pursue publication. If you want to read it, contact me directly and I’ll send it. I never publish potential publication pieces on the blog because oftentimes that disqualifies them from most professional publications. 
  • With my advancement to the second round, I will receive a new prompt on Thursday night and will have three days to write a 2,000-word story using said prompt. I have entered this contest three or four years in a row, and I have never advanced past the second round, so here’s to hoping for a good prompt and a visit from a profound muse. There are four rounds total in the short story contest. 
  • I have also started a new project that could turn into a larger work. I have workshopped the first 7,000 words or so with my writing group and have received positive feedback. The one drawback is that I tend to be a pantser instead of plotter, which means that I don’t write with an outline just by reacting to the whims of my imagination. While this tends to work for me in short spurts, I can often write myself into corners. (See Pandemonium bullet above). This project is more of a dystopian epic set it two different times in the future. One time feels like a time-travel Sci-Fi story, the other timeline is closer to a fantasy story. It’s too early to tell if I am going to be able to pull off a logical, meaningful and entertaining story. That’s the challenge, if I choose to accept it. 

Well, I think that basically does it. I hope to get back on track to posting once a week or so. Sorry for making you wait, and thanks for reading. 










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