Monday, October 31, 2022

From the Beat: Well, That Was Fast.

 


I’ll admit after nearly 20 years of covering high school sports that I can usually see a blowout coming, and that it rarely takes much time to happen. Usually by the end of the first quarter, the scoreboard is already lopsided and the difference in talent, coaching and preparation are evident.

Saturday’s Eight-Man first round game was a little different. With just over a minute left until halftime, the Milledgeville Missiles led 8-3 over the visiting West Prairie Cyclones. Milledgeville had scored on their first drive, but since that point, struggled to move the ball. While West Prairie couldn’t get the ball moving on the ground, they had hit several big plays through the air. The game was shaping up to be a tightly contested affair.

Instead, Milledgeville scored two quick touchdowns in the last minute before half, and then scored two more touchdowns in the first minute-and-a-half in the third quarter. Suddenly, an 8-3 game was 40-3. It was 52-3 by the end.

I admit that I didn’t see that coming.

Here’s a link to the gamer: Milledgeville pulls away from West Prairie to win eight-man first-round playoff game – Shaw Local


Friday, October 28, 2022

From the Beat: One Plus Two Equals Lede

 



Since leaving SVM late in 2015, my occasional sojourns back into journalism have consisted mainly of covering football games. I’ve also done a few basketball, softball, and baseball games. On Thursday night, I covered volleyball for the first time in at least seven years. I say, at least, because I don’t remember the last volleyball match I covered.

 If I am also being truthful, I never thought I was very good at covering volleyball. It’s not about liking or disliking the sport – I like volleyball just fine – but I have always found that I struggled to retain anything that happened in a match. Other sports, I often rely on playing back events in a game in my mind to help weave a story. I supplement my memory with my notes and stats. With volleyball, I am whispering numbers of jerseys with each pass, then scribbling notes and recording stats between plays. It’s a blur of numerical nonsense.

So how do I approach writing about it? I usually try to formulate some sort of trend out the numbers. Thursday’s match – the 1A Polo Regional Championship – included an impressive run in Game 3 by the eventual victors. In the interviews, the coach highlighted the rotation at the end of Game 3. One plus two equals lede – as in the lede of my story which I concocted in my head during the frantic drive home to type the story by the 8:45 deadline.

From the lede I navigated to the turning point of the match – another run by Newman in the middle of Game 2, and then I wrapped up by talking about the start of the match last where the Comets were put in a hole by Fulton in Game 1.

My advice to anyone writing about sports, a good gamer rarely starts at the beginning of the game and works to the end. Instead, it goes straight to the most important part. From there, it might go forward to the end before going back to the start. Heck, depending on the space available and if anything, significant happened, you might not even mention the start of the game.

The same is true with fiction. It’s not always linear, and probably shouldn’t be. Use the sequencing of the story to help build the narrative.

Well, that’s all for me. Here’ a link to my gamer for SVM, if you are so inclined: Volleyball: Newman rallies past Fulton to win 1A Polo Regional championship – Shaw Local


Tuesday, October 18, 2022

From the Beat: Point of View

 


Point of view is something that is always on my mind when it comes to writing. When I am writing fiction, I often play with perspective. Sometimes first person is great because it puts the reader intimately close with the narrator and keeps them blind to the things in the plot that I want to be a surprise in the end. Sometimes I prefer third-person because it allows me to paint with a broader brush while also giving more details from more angles.

In journalism, point of view takes on a little different meaning to me. I’m the viewer and I have to report what I see, and then what I learn from interviews. My natural inclination with football is to roam the sideline during games. While it can make keeping stats more difficult at times, the trade off is being mere feet from the action both on the field and the interaction between players, referees, and coaches on the sideline.

 Some sports scribes prefer the press box. My issues are that the view from press boxes at small schools in Illinois can vary greatly in size, quality, and space available. Often the better the press box, the farther away the field. I remember covering a state football championship game in Champaign and feeling like I was on another planet. While the view allows you to see formations, and how plays develop, I usually feel like I am missing the story of the game.

Friday night, I was pinged with a 10:15 PM deadline for the game between Mendota and Newman at Sterling’s Roscoe Eades Stadium. The early deadline meant I had to write pieces of the story during the game, so I needed to be in the press box. Roscoe Eades facilities are second to none in the state, so that wasn’t an issue. I did notice though that I felt like a complete stranger when approaching coaches and players afterward, and that reflected in the tongue-twisting questions I tried to ask. Maybe I am reaching for a connection there (I admit to never being a great interviewer), but it certainly contributed to the issue.

Anyways, I powered through and barely made deadline, but I am sure the story I told would have been very different if I had been on the sideline rather than the press box.

Check it out here: https://www.shawlocal.com/friday-night-drive/news/2022/10/15/newmans-smash-tops-mendotas-flash-in-tight-trac-mississippi-contest/


Wednesday, October 5, 2022

Write-On Prompt: Falling

 


Note: We had prompt night on Tuesday at Write On. The prompt was the word: Fall. You could take any way you want. This is stark little tale is what came from my head.

Beyond the city, the land rolled like the humps on a camel’s back, and still Ethan ran. His sneakers smacked off the pavement in a frenetic rhythm that would have provided an excellent backbone to a heavy metal song. The sweat collected on the small of his back, his armpits, across his brow. His lungs and throat burned; his chest ached from the hammering of his heart; his eyes blurred, from sweat, from tears, he could no longer tell. His body wasn’t trained for this, and it was revolting, but his head wouldn’t let him stop.

Still, he ran with big heaving breaths up hills that he’d never thought twice about when he and Kenny and Misty had went joyriding in the country in Kenny’s father’s Ford Mustang on sleepy summer afternoons. On foot, the hills were like mountains, and the downward stretches passed before he could feel the relief. A breeze might have helped, or it might have just provided a reminder with the stench of the city behind.

The city had fallen, and if Ethan stopped running, so would he.

***

Six miles out, the two-lane road came to a tee, the pavement splitting to the north and south, but Ethan didn’t turn. He stumbled over a rickety fence line and continued across the remains of a picked field of corn. The shorn-off stalks stabbed at his calves, tripping him altogether from time to time. The ground wasn’t yet cold, but it was hard and dry, the kind of dry the earth gets after reaping, as if man had plucked all the moisture from the soil along with the corn and soybeans and wheat.

Something rumbled behind him. It was a hum, almost as if the world’s largest refrigerator had kicked to life. He didn’t dare look back, looking back meant seeing, meant knowing, meant believing. He’d almost seen it in the city, just a flash from the corner of his eyes. If he had stopped, just for one better look, it would have got it him. Looking meant never looking away.

The hum grew louder, but not closer. It felt like a mock to Ethan, as his tired and dirty body begged for a rest.

“Just one look, what would that hurt?” The hum translated itself in Ethan’s brain. “You never know, you might just like what you see.”

Ethan hopped over a knee-high yellow stalk, came down on the uneven ground, turning his ankle, but that didn’t stop him. His run was more of a hobble now, a stabbing pain pierced his right foot with every step, but he kept going.

***

He made it to a small village by nightfall, nothing more than a pack of houses at an intersection, a village hall, and a service station. No lights. No mother’s walking children in strollers at sunset. No TV or computer screens glowing.

He had to stop.

The service station door was open, but inside the aisles were picked nearly clean save for a few jars of this and a couple packs of that. Behind the counter, a body was on the floor, head twisted away from Ethan, palms up, chest caved in. It had been here, this village had fell.

He inventoried the aisles. Two bags of pretzels, one jar of peanut butter, a roll of some sort of sour candy, and two half bottles of water. He collected it all, took it to the back of the store where he came to the unisex bathroom door.

Pressing his ear against it, he listened.

***

She screamed when he opened the door, swinging a broom handle that connected with his left shoulder, he dropped the water bottles before pushing her back into the darkness of the bathroom.

“Shut up.” Ethan whispered.

Only heavy breathing answered. The room was pitch black. There were rumors that it didn’t follow people into dark rooms.

“What’s your name?” He asked.

She stayed quiet, maybe hoping if she didn’t answer, he’d leave her alone.

“I’m Ethan. I’m seventeen. I’m from the city.”

“Did the city fall?” A small child’s voice asked.

“Yes.”

There were sniffles in the dark. Ethan thought he might be crying, too. His body hurt too much to know for sure.

“I’m Lila,” she said minutes later. “I’m eight.”

“Hi, Lila.”

“How did you get away from the city?” she asked.

“I ran.”

***

They dipped the pretzels into the peanut butter until one bag was gone, and then shared one of the half bottles of water. Lila had sneaked to the service station from a farm just outside of the village. She didn’t know how long ago. Maybe two days. Her parents and brother had fell.

“I closed my eyes when I heard the hum and hid under my bed. It couldn’t find me with my eyes closed,” Lila said.

“Really?”

“Yeppers. My cousin Rollie told me that worked, and it did.”

“Have you kept your eyes closed in here?”

“Most of the time, but that’s because I was scared of the dark at first. Now, nothing scares me.”

Ethan smiled.

“I’m sure IT scares you.”

“Un uh, nothing scares me anymore.”

They slept back-to-back that night, and when Ethan woke the next morning, she was gone.

When he opened the door, it was there, and he fell.


Tuesday, October 4, 2022

From the Beat: The Good and Bad of Deadlines

 


About halfway between Dixon and Amboy, Illinois, I received a phone call from SVM Sports Editor Ty Reynolds that the Eight-Man football game I was covering was going to be picked up by one of our sister papers, and thus, I was going to be writing on deadline. Fortunately, the soft deadline was 11:15 PM which wasn’t much different from the time I had been trying to hit with my other game stories this season. I had asked that my games be ones going to web and not on the deadlines for the morning print edition.

I hit the time easily, as my game between Amboy and Hiawatha finished by a few minutes after 9 p.m. In fact, I made it back to the Telegraph office before Ty, who was about two blocks away at the Dixon game.

When I started at SVM back in 2004, the newspaper printing was done in-house and done at like 10 AM. So, essentially, we had all night to write. My memories of that were long nights where everyone seemed to work on everything but the paper due the next morning.

Thankfully, around 2008 or so, we went to a morning delivery, so our deadlines changed to about midnight or 1 AM. I was a fan. Writing on deadline forces focus. When it comes to game coverage, it should translate into more concise, tightly written stories. I am a firm believer in short gamers. Leave the longer pieces for feature, investigative and enterprise stories.

As much as I liked having a deadline, too early is a hinderance to a quality product when it comes to sports. Sadly, when Shaw shut down the press at SVM to print the local papers in the suburbs, the new deadlines make it impossible to have much if any game coverage in the section. Shaw’s plan is used by the bigger newspaper chains in the country. They slash staff, print all out of one place, and then tell you the newspaper industry is dying because circulation rates continue to drop. It could never be, in part, because they aren’t providing what local people want. I’ve never understood why if you’re going to print dozens of newspapers in one place, why not go back to being an afternoon delivery, so that you can still provide readers with results the next day, plus it provides the chance for school-aged kids to get back in the paper delivery game.

Anyways, I made deadline Friday. If you’re a writer, I recommend putting deadlines on your projects, because it forces action. Check out what I produced Friday here: Amboy-LaMoille slows down Hiawatha for victory – Shaw Local

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